Remember the day of the snow. The snow looks like vanilla icecream, dancing across the air softly, coming down and fading on the cold icey slippery ground as more and more comes down, and this time it is thick. It sparkles like crystals and when it stops the ice on the ground crunches up and then it starts falling again.
By Mia
Remember the day of the snow. White beautiful freezing flakes on the ground. Melting like powder. Frozen pools, slippery stairs, flakey grounds. You can make snowballs and snowmen.
By Rajena
Remember the day of the snow. It was so beautiful I wanted to eat it. The fluffy snow is like icecream. The soft wild snow curls around my head but then it softly touches the hard floor.
By Abi
Wow! What fabulous descriptive writing Room 18. I love the strong verbs you have used like dancing and crunching. I really like Abi's sentence: The soft wild snow curls around my head. I can really picture that in my mind as I remember the way the snowflakes felt as they landed in my hair. Great job you guys!
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ReplyDelete wow!!!!! What fabulous writing!!!!!! Feel like I can picture it so clearly, almost like I was there!!!!!! Well done girls!!!! mia, I am so proud of you!!! Love mum
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